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Originally Posted by Peto
But you clicked on the image to see what it said, right? That's me trying to be mischievous 
I added the subtitle as an afterthought because Amazon recommends it, and because "Dawn" is quite a bleak title--used so many times--and it would give it some strength. However, I named this story in 1996 and I was not going to change it, so the subtitle is there as for aesthetic reasons (I like the line of text there), and as a catcheye 
I see maybe it's not working as I planned, but... |
Yes, I had to click to read it. You see that as mischievous on your part.
I enlarged it because you posted here at MR. If I had been looking on Amazon, I would not have enlarged but would have been finding the back button so fast, it would have made your head spin.
My first impression looking at that cover was "another person that thinks they can just upload anything and it will sell."
Hold on. I want to be fair about this since you did ask for feedback.