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HarryT · 06-10-2017, 05:58 AM

Since you asked for feedback:

I'd really suggest re-working your cover. The subtitle "Freedom Takes Fight" is almost invisible, particularly where it goes over the image of the planet. I didn't even see that it was there until I looked very closely at the cover.

Also your offer: "Free ebook download until 06/09/2017"

The majority of people on this site are going to read that date as "6th September 2017". I'd write dates in an unambiguous format if I were you.

06-10-2017, 05:58 AM	#2
HarryT eBook Enthusiast Posts: 85,557 Karma: 93980341 Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: UK Device: Kindle Oasis 2, iPad Pro 10.5", iPhone 6	Since you asked for feedback: I'd really suggest re-working your cover. The subtitle "Freedom Takes Fight" is almost invisible, particularly where it goes over the image of the planet. I didn't even see that it was there until I looked very closely at the cover. Also your offer: "Free ebook download until 06/09/2017" The majority of people on this site are going to read that date as "6th September 2017". I'd write dates in an unambiguous format if I were you.