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I may owe you a bit of an apology. My first post does sound a little harsh.
Here is the thing. You want a person to take several hours to read your book and take notes where it doesn't make sense. You get feedback to help you make more money potentially. All the reader gets is a book that might or might not be worth anything. I don't know you. I don't know your style. That was why I asked for a sample. I wanted to make sure you could actually string a sentence together. I have been burned before. (Though being asked to review for a free book can be challenging too.)
Let me give you an example of the bad.
We went too my fathers' house's sew we could set on the couch's and the to of us...
Note: The incomplete sentence. The "book" was very incomplete too.
Need I continue.
Every apostrophe and homonym was wrong.
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