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Old 06-05-2017, 07:44 AM   #30
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Originally Posted by Dr. Drib View Post
"What?!!!??" Bob exclaimed and then further expostulated: "Did you say 'naration' or 'narration'!!!!!!?????"

Jose and Mary looked at Bob and then both burst out laughing. "Hah! Hah! Hah!!" they roared.
I'm sorry, Dr. Drib, but your work needs modernising:

"" exclaimed and then further , "Did you say '' or '' ?"

and at and then both * out . " " they


Now there's some expressive prose.

* sorry, couldn't find a bursting balloon
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