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Originally Posted by meeera
This sounds like maybe middle grade or emerging-reader fiction, where things can be a bit 'looser'; and tight third person, where the MC's emotions can bleed into the narration.
Personally I'd lose the double exclamation points, but that's a question of style.
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I share your opinion.
I only use an interrobang or double exclamation points when writing for children or posting on my favorite ebook site!!
