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Old 06-03-2017, 10:58 PM   #19
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Originally Posted by Steven Lake View Post
To everyone else, as far as my use of extra sentence punctuation, I typically don't ever use shock points (ie, !?) in anything but dialog. However, I do occasionally like to use ! and itallics to add a little bit of bang to the narration, but nothing exhaustive. For me it'd usually be something like this:

"Then Tom and his gang turned the corner and ran into a bear! Now that was definitely something new!!"

I typically only ever use it when I want to add a bit more punch and emotion to the scene. But her belief was that you should never use anything but period and question mark to end a sentence, and God forbid you should ever consider using italics on anything that was narration as those should be reserved only for dialog. As I said above, I tend to disagree and it sounds like most of the rest of you do too. In fact, I was kinda surprised at her statement as my college creative writing teacher never nicked me for doing that, nor have any of my reviewers.
Double punctuation is both unnecessary and distracting. Three exclamation points in your example is three too many, unless you're writing a comic book. Italicizing that doesn't offend my editorial sensibilities, unless you were to italicize frequently. Punctuation and typography aren't supposed to call attention to themselves; they support the message.

Perhaps your teacher cared more about creativity than punctuation. That doesn't mean it's okay to scatter exclamation points everywhere.
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