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Originally Posted by gmw
That would be nice too. 
As you mentioned with regard to nightmares, it is possible to sometimes be too effective. One reader (a family member) could not finish my first novel. They never got past the first few chapters, they found them too depressing. In some respects this was flattering, they were intentionally emotive and tragic ... but they were not supposed to be so depressing that the reader couldn't keep going.  |
I just grabbed a free sample of your first book.
Loved the prologue. Your writing is fantastic. You pull your reader in and they can feel everything.
Now that being said, right now I can't get past the first chapter. You had me almost crying from the second page.
I predict you will be an author that I can say I knew him before he hit it big.