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Old 05-04-2017, 12:43 AM   #25792
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Finished Some Kind of Hero By S. J. Delos. As entertaining as the first of the series, thankfully without the explicit sex, but again similar problems with editing (or serious lack of proofreading): This time the painfully obvious was a scene where she is hugging her boyfriend from behind, but in the middle of the scene he is able to tuck a strand of hair behind her ear.

Lots of dropped words, too. There is a third book in the works; I kind of wish the author would send me the galley just so I can point these things out before publishing...

Meanwhile, I have begun book 12 of the Foreigner series, Betrayer.
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