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Old 04-24-2017, 01:02 PM   #24
Cinisajoy
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Originally Posted by E.M.DuBois View Post
Do you know anyone here who would do a proofread for a trade or something? Like I format their work for them proofreading? (Namely fiction, so I could kinda peek and read some for myself.)
Tell me I am reading this post wrong.
Are you saying that you are charging $15.99 for a book that hasn't been proofread?

Out of kindness and because I have nothing to do for an hour, I will go look at your sample on Smashwords.
I looked at your sample.
Do I give you my opinion here or in private?

Your book has potential. You paint wonderful pictures with your words. The biggest problem I had was a sense of disjointedness between paragraphs.
It looks like a fairly decent first draft.
For a 672 page book, I don't think you will find anyone willing to trade proofreading for formatting.
I was reading with my critical eye, so I would be looking at an hour per 10 pages.

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