[Cinisajoy]

I am with the others on this.
Unknown author.
First Book.
Sounds like a teenage or young adult fantasy.
The other thing is if the description is any indication of the writing style of the author then the book more than likely needs to be proofread.
Now, you can play find the error in the description.
Hint, think back to Schoolhouse rock.


So that will put off many people especially when you are higher priced than most mainstream authors.
Yes, I know you said it is a long book. That price is still way too much.
I also see you are not available many places.
Another turn off.

You did ask for a review.