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Old 04-11-2017, 01:49 PM   #17
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Originally Posted by Lemurion View Post
I agree, you can never have too many gorillas; especially when they're talking gorillas.

I've come up with a revision, let me know what you think:
I was just about to suggest that wording for the first paragraph

I found the original, awkward.

I will leave providing Bananas to Tubemonkey
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