I think that description is all wrong. I would suggest you change it to this:
The explosion took off the top page of the Sunday Times, but nobody got hurt, 'cause blood is pretty doggone thick. Mebbe that's the problem. Brother, how it is!
Vinny and Michael always protected each other; that is, when they weren't slapping each other with the Sunday Times. But they were children, and they liked to play games, like putting firecrackers in the butler's pants pocket. Talk about yodelling!
Dark secrets, dark power, battling butlers and firecrackers - and a MURDER! And a hardware store selling plenty of nails! It's all here for the reader to enjoy.
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