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Old 04-08-2017, 12:21 AM   #60
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Originally Posted by Gregg Bell View Post
The latest.

Did you try having the sun lower? (It's always hard to guess the effect without playing.) One of the things I liked about the previous version was the way the title text (and face) rose up from the sun (to put it dramatically: like she was screaming up out of the sun). In this new version I don't really like the way the sun sort of splits her face into two parts.

P.S. Otherwise I'm liking it.
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