Okay. I love this tagline but I don't know if it works with the cover. What do you guys think? (I like this cover. Yes, it'll rely heavily on the title but I'm of the 'less is more' school of thinking. And it shows up cleanly as a thumbnail--which will be most of the looks it gets.)
And, ducks, this is a suspense thriller. Not some slow-moving suspense thing. (I'm okay with 'action.') Thanks.