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Old 03-21-2017, 12:03 PM   #12
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Originally Posted by Kanila G View Post
I don't have much experience with 8 to 10 year old kids. Mine are in Kindergarten. Do you think the story would engage 8 to 10 year olds?
Did the illustrator like it? There is your answer right there.

Now go write another one but leave out adverbs if you want little readers.

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They do neat things like fix titles and on occasion break up tiffs.

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