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Old 01-05-2017, 03:04 PM   #3
Cinisajoy
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Originally Posted by Dr. Drib View Post
This little pamphlet of 23 pages is in desperate need of a proof-reader, since it it is obvious that English is a second language.

Unfortunately, based upon the 'Small Ad' at the beginning of your pamphlet and in addition to what you have already written in your first post here, I cannot recommend this at all.

I highly recommend you hire someone to proof-read your text and then resubmit it to Amazon.
I peeked at the look inside. Just looking at the first paragraph, I would charge $5 a page for proofreading.
Cancel said offer. I looked through your entire book.
I would recommend you take the book down, find a real proofreader and then republish.
For future reference, Google Translate is not a good proofreader. It only translates but does not correct the grammar.
Or take it down and stick with your coloring books.

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