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Old 01-05-2017, 11:52 AM   #2
Dr. Drib
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This little pamphlet of 23 pages is in desperate need of a proof-reader, since it it is obvious that English is a second language.

Unfortunately, based upon the 'Small Ad' at the beginning of your pamphlet and in addition to what you have already written in your first post here, I cannot recommend this at all.

I highly recommend you hire someone to proof-read your text and then resubmit it to Amazon.
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