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Originally Posted by Hitch
Hey, Red:
I'm sure that everyone, myself included, would eagerly welcome any other contributions/comments/criticisms that you'd care to make. If you'd like to send me some, I'll happily incorporate them if you don't have time to do that yourself, with attribution, of course.
Hitch
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Hitch, my criticisms would for the most part be stylistic. I'm not sure the major stake holders, or average user, would appreciate my preference for a terse, impersonal, almost legalistic, expository form.
When your version is published, I'll 'edit' a section and post it here and let them pass judgement. Depending on the outcome we can discuss - I'd definitely need someone to proofread. As you've probably noticed I tend to omit and repeat words and sometimes whole phrases
BR
PS : Seasons Greetz, Happy New Year, and All That Jazz.
Were you one of the 1 billion our Lord Mayor said would be watching our fireworks, or do I regard that as a Post-Truth faradiddle, a bit of Fake News braggadocio, or an Alt+→ conspiracy Ψ²