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The cover picture is OK, but the typography is flat and dull. The cover screams 'self-published by one-person band'.
Part 1 of a new epic fantasy, and no indication that the other parts are available, or have even been written?
The first paragraph of the blurb put me off.
"Millennia have passed since the Red King met his death by the hands of Kahyin Asundar, Prince of the white elves. Kahyin and his brethren now face an even greater enemy known as man. They take all the lands and waters have to offer, they multiply well beyond their means and their kings long to see the elves wiped from existence."
"enemy known as man" ?
That just doesn't sound/look right.
"enemy known as Man" if you must, or "enemy known as men".
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