Thread: Which blurb is better?
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Old 10-07-2016, 10:05 AM   #5
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Originally Posted by Dr. Drib View Post
I'm sorry, but I don't like cliches that include "screaming headlines."

[Deleted earlier comment]

She seems too young to be so fully committed.

None of this adds up for me.

-- For both of those blurbs.

Sorry.
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