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Old 10-06-2016, 03:01 PM   #2
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I'm sorry, but I don't like cliches that include "screaming headlines."

[Deleted earlier comment]

She seems too young to be so fully committed.

None of this adds up for me.

-- For both of those blurbs.

Sorry.
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