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Old 07-17-2016, 11:50 AM   #1066
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Originally Posted by booklover6 View Post
This is at the bottom of the blurb for a book 3 in a series in KU:

**This book contains a male with an unhealthy addiction to human television. A feisty handbag welding female who sees her friends finding love and longs to find happiness of her own. And the desire that consumes them when they finally meet.

Totally puts me off the entire series. If you are going to use the wrong word in a blurb, how is the story going to be right? (Auther is E.M. Reder)
Maybe she does weld metal pocketbooks for a living?

The sentence structure is sorely lacking, too.

from my Galaxy S6
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