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Originally Posted by Pajamaman
I read the first chapter in Amazon previewer. Yeah, there's a couple of funny sentences, but really the grammar and style are overall okay, and don't get in the way of the pace of the writing. So I disagree with the previous comment about typos.
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You "disagree?" About what? There are at least two typos in the first few pages.
(A missing article near location 24, and a missing comma near 85).
And you seem to have noticed the 'funny' sentences, so what's to disagree with?
Or do you just mean they didn't bother you?
I didn't say they were especially egregious errors, but with the torrent of self-published works available, it's important to make a good first impression.