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Just for your information:
I like your version and I congratulate you for it. I think it's better than mine and there are really enough differences between the two versions to make yours worthwhile. I usually go for a simpler (cleaner as Patricia puts it) version of a book that is easy to read and works on all platforms. I am a handyman, not an artist. Interesting that you chose to display the poem purely (sans illustrations) first. I think that was a really good idea.
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