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Old 01-23-2009, 07:22 AM   #2
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It's a nice version. For use with a Cybook I'd wish for a 600x800 cover, but that's minor.

I think you need to check your dashes. Some seem to be missing, and those that remain are just hyphen '-' not em-dashes '—'. Also, your quotes aren't always the right way around.

Missing — example:

Over many a quaint and curious volume of forgotten lore,

should be followed by an em-dash

Incorrect - and quotes:

”’T is some visiter,” I muttered, ”tapping at my chamber door-

should be

“’T is some visiter,” I muttered, “tapping at my chamber door—
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