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Originally Posted by Grey Ram
For me, the central premise sounds intriguing but IMHO it's poorly developed. .... There are so many things that are hinted at, but not justified enough in the story to allow me to 'live' in this world, I simply could not connect with it.
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Grey Ram, I think that part of the issue here is that the book is a series, and I'm not spelling out all the details of how everything works in the first volume. Some things will be developed more fully further down the line, in subsequent books, and my plan is to use the opportunities that arise in the natural course of the overall plot to explore or reveal the justifications behind the world-building background and social setup. In fact, the core of the actual story
is Rowan herself learning these things.
As the saying goes: your mileage may vary. If you can't engage without more explication up front, well, possibly I'm just not the author for you.
Luckily, there are hundreds of other authors out there, some of whom are really great!
Thanks for giving my book your attention.