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Originally Posted by Xatalos
Oh... Alright. Thanks for the valuable feedback.
Also thanks for complimenting the story  What did you think about the "twist" (alternative ending)?
Although this might not be the best case to discuss that considering spoilers. Perhaps private message? |
I didn't read that far yet. I will let you know when I finish it.
On formatting, yes there are a few books that have formatting like yours. I also ran across one that looked like this...
Space space space - - - one sentence- - -
4 spaces - - -two sentence---
-name-
and so on an so forth.
That was a mess.