Thread: Free Children's Book "The Birds and the Water Puddle" (14th - 15th April)
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Old 04-26-2016, 10:45 AM   #5
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Originally Posted by Cinisajoy View Post
The illustrations are fabulous.
The story on the other hand made me go ?.
The extra punctuation threw me off.


Thanks for sharing your review and regret the delay in replying. I'll surely re-work the over done punctuations and resubmit the book. Will positively work on your feeback on the story while preparing my next book. Thanks again.
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