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Old 04-26-2016, 10:41 AM   #4
talkingclips
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Originally Posted by ApK View Post
Thank you for the the offer.

The illustrations are very cute!

You might want to consider having someone edit the text.

"He loved the chirping birds did .."

Did you have some artistic purpose in mind for making up your own punctuation marks?


Thanks a ton for your feedback and regret the delay in responding. I did create the additional punctuations to make it sound a bit dramatic .... however guess did not go as i thought it would. I'll surely re-work to put those right and submit a revised version shortly. Thanks again.
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