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Originally Posted by alansplace
Yikes!  That last paragraph almost ruined the book for me! It was the reason that I was unhappy with 'Burned'. 
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Well, what I liked about the last paragraph that it sort of finalized what was coming for quite some books. Also, it was a clean point of setting up the next book.
Like I said, it felt that the original idea for the book was finished too soon and the rest was to fill it up. There were some good parts, but almost a third of the book?
A big no-no for me was the fact that the ending still came as a surprise... According to my reader I had quite some pages left. I didn't like that there were some chapters of another book were there for promotional reasons. That was a nasty surprise.