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Originally Posted by bookman156
Bit late to the party, but happened to read this thread.
The best way to punctuate the sentence is clearly: 'Her vulnerability, her inability to tolerate ridicule, had led her to kill another human being.'
Has she killed other human beings? Or is this her first and perhaps only? The sentence is ambiguous in that regard, despite the effort to punctuate it correctly.
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I think the overwhelming consensus is that you are right.