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Originally Posted by cromag
There were a couple of minor formatting issues. Also, the author makes a mistake that would probably only be obvious to a New Jersey resident -- and even then, only to a few. She refers to the Neptune City Sheriff from neighboring Neptune City -- in New Jersey, at least, the Sheriff's office is part of the county government. They handle the county court security, county correctional facilities, assist with warrants, etc. The sheriff would not usually be involved in local police work. I just substituted Neptune City Police Chief where necessary. |
The use of sheriff may have been intentional to keep things fictional. If the author knew about a 2-lane highway in Neptune City, I'm sure she would know NC has its own police force.