[Cinisajoy]

Dan if you are reading this, you might want to reread carefully your introduction in the book.
I found at least one dropped word. "It's entirely up too." The sentence makes no sense.
There are a couple more places that look like you dropped a sentence or two.
Oh and lastly, if your partner is at the breading point, she really needs a break.

I wouldn't be so picky if you weren't in the self-help category.

I must say thank you for giving credit to your sources.
Other tiny suggestion.
What color did you use for your ideas? It comes out a very light gray (grey) on an ereader. Very hard to see.
I am assuming you were trying to highlight the ideas.

Last comment I hope.
Under your Write a Book: the first sentence makes no sense.
So please proofread, fix the errors and republish as you do have some fantastic ideas.