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The book in itself might be ok.
You do have some pretty good ideas.
Now I did have a few qualms.
#1. Sign up for all my stuff at the beginning of the book. Let me get to know you better before wanting my personal information. It would have come across much better at the back of the book.
Most people don't sign up for newsletters and other stuff before reading the first book.
#2 Too many links to websites. If you want to reference them again back of the book. Many people read e-books on their kindles and the experimental browser is not always website friendly. Oh and do you really want to be pulling people out of your book? They might not come back.
#3 Your honesty alerts...they threw me totally out of the book. I found those big letters very distracting. Kind of made me wonder if you were lying in the rest of the book.
I do wish you good luck.
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