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Old 01-28-2016, 02:53 AM   #622
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Der ist schön.


Heute mal zur Abstimmung:

Welche dritte Zeile ist denn besser? Eher nachdenklich oder eher spielerisch?

Tropfen vom Dach
ein Windstoß trieb ihn durchs Fenster

- auf mein Schreibpapier

oder

- in meinen Kaffee

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