Dan,
Here's my take, after a quick read:
- The blurb's in need of a good editor (so I imagine the book is, too, and I'm not tempted to read further). What needs editing? Grammar, punctuation, sentence structure.
- The cover's attractive, but in combination with the book's title and blurb, it implies this might be a sci-fi novel (although your description and Amazon's category tags indicate it's not).
I hope this is helpful. Best of luck.