Thread: The Steel Harvest: A Web Novel Series by J.D. Miller
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Old 01-14-2016, 04:24 PM   #2
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I've had a quick look at this, and what immediately struck me was the appalling number of errors. You really need to use an editor; there's just no excuse for such things.
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