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webbdesigns · 01-11-2016, 02:28 PM

Thanks! That definitely helps. I'll consider losing anthology. One thing I've been advised against changing and definitely want to keep is the explicit statement that this is the first part. Do you have any suggestions for alternatives?

I have checked out some of the Jet books, but never Black. Jet reminded more of Bourne than anything else (which is good--I love Bourne).

01-11-2016, 02:28 PM	#11
webbdesigns Member Posts: 13 Karma: 10 Join Date: Jan 2016 Device: none	Thanks! That definitely helps. I'll consider losing anthology. One thing I've been advised against changing and definitely want to keep is the explicit statement that this is the first part. Do you have any suggestions for alternatives? I have checked out some of the Jet books, but never Black. Jet reminded more of Bourne than anything else (which is good--I love Bourne).