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Originally Posted by shalym
I don't see any "gaping holes" in the lines you have underlined.
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Shari
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True, it's not that obvious on this example as it can be in some other cases. I've been honest.
But take care, do not look at it for too long, because the poison may enter your brain. Your eye, today blissfully unaware and totally untrained to spot these kinds of defects, will begin to notice them every few lines. It can be the beginning of a long suffering. It's the Vischnu malediction.
Please disagree but dont' quote me in bold. Thanks.