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Old 01-04-2016, 08:11 AM   #2
davidfor
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Kevin was wearing his favorite white polo shirt unbuttoned to the middle of his chest.
You started to lose me with this image.
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He’d even worn his golden chain for seductive emphasis.
And you would have lost me with this image.
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He held the finest bottle of Chateau Lafite that had ever been distilled.
But, you had already lost me here. It's wine. It is not distilled. With such a basic mistake, the only reason I'd read further would be to count the number of mistakes. It's that looking at a car-crash effect.
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