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Originally Posted by DiapDealer
My favorite goofy mistake from any book (trad- or self-pubbed) was the following sentence:
"The sound of gunfire lit the afternoon sky as they prepared to leave."
Tried to read that book (trad-pubbed, btw) several different times, but could never get past that sentence.  |
Sonoluminescence
To be fair, it's a fantasy book, flying sailboats powered by windspirits, sound may make pretty lights when combined with elementals
