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HarryT · 11-13-2015, 05:10 AM

Putting the blurb immediately after the salutation seems wrong to me; I'd add a bit of explanatory text first. Something like "I've recently completed a new book and am hoping you'd considering adding it to your portfolio", or something similar?

Also, address the person by name. "Dear Mr X" or "Dear Ms Y". Nobody likes to receive form letters.

11-13-2015, 05:10 AM	#8
HarryT eBook Enthusiast Posts: 85,557 Karma: 93980341 Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: UK Device: Kindle Oasis 2, iPad Pro 10.5", iPhone 6	Putting the blurb immediately after the salutation seems wrong to me; I'd add a bit of explanatory text first. Something like "I've recently completed a new book and am hoping you'd considering adding it to your portfolio", or something similar? Also, address the person by name. "Dear Mr X" or "Dear Ms Y". Nobody likes to receive form letters. Last edited by HarryT; 11-13-2015 at 05:32 AM.