Thread: Help punctuating this sentence please?
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Old 11-13-2015, 12:53 AM   #11
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Wasn’t he being a bit of an alpha male a bit of a king perhaps?
Wasn't he being a bit of an alpha male; a bit of a king, perhaps?

I think the comma between 'king' and 'perhaps' is optional, depending on the rhythm and tone you want.
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