[Dr. Drib]

Here is my advice:

It's a shame that you and Michael didn't do a good job of proof-reading your book before making it available on Amazon.

After encountering run-on sentences, grammatical errors, and misused words, I'm afraid that many people will be turned off from reading beyond the sample.

Try to get a professional proof-reader and resubmit your book.

Remember: You only have one chance to get a reader interested in reading further. Correcting the errors above will get you more readers.