I'm having trouble with this sentence:
1) Here, have some bananas, King Kong, you big old alpha male bloke.
2) Here, King Kong, you big old alpha male bloke. Have some bananas.
3) Shove these bananas up your arse, King Kong, you misbegotten alpha male bloke!
I'm really undecided.
I thought about asking Gregg, but he still has 10,879 sentences that need critiqued, so I know there's no help coming from him.
Any advice, or help, would be appreciated.
Any help or advice, would be appreciated.
I would appreciate any help or advice.
Thanks,
Captain Brigadier (Frigidaire) Rolf, the First
