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Originally Posted by Rizla
My take on it. I've changed / reinterpreted stuff because I felt it needed the extra sounds in there. But overall very good. You have a good base there.
I like the existing title. I'm surprised it hasn't been used before. Sure, it's not obviously "suspense" but it's good.
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Thanks Rizla. Sorry (I just added a note to the OP.) but I've pretty much bailed on that original version. But you know what, I like the title too. LOL But I admit it isn't very suspenseful. Still mulling that over. If you get a chance check post #11.