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Old 10-23-2015, 12:33 PM   #12
Rizla
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Lily Russell is a world-class ballerina. In her mind at least.

She’ll stop at nothing to join the prestigious Royal Ballet, and her jealous ex-lover is fueling her fantasies.

Then Lily meets a king, who is no fantasy.

Two loves, two cultures and two worlds collide to force a single choice, a choice that that may cost Lily her dreams, her sanity and even her life.

A mind-bending clash between what’s real and what’s imagined, American Ballerina is a suspenseful ride that never stops.
My take on it. I've changed / reinterpreted stuff because I felt it needed the extra sounds in there. But overall very good. You have a good base there.
I like the existing title. I'm surprised it hasn't been used before. Sure, it's not obviously "suspense" but it's good.

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