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Originally Posted by Dr. Drib
I wouldn't use any of yours. I would use mine:
1) Her vulnerability, including an inability to tolerate ridicule, had led her to kill another human being.
Another point: You use too many pronouns in one sentence.
By Greg Bell and Don Broyles  |
Yeah, there are a lot of pronouns in mine. Yours changes the meaning just enough though. Hmm. I don't know. It's all about meaning ultimately.