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Gregg Bell · 10-20-2015, 05:19 PM

Her vulnerability her inability to tolerate ridicule had led her to kill another human being.

#1) Her vulnerability, her inability to tolerate ridicule, had led her to kill another human being.

#2) Her vulnerability, her inability to tolerate ridicule had led her to kill another human being.

#3) another way

10-20-2015, 05:19 PM	#1
Gregg Bell Gregg Bell Posts: 2,266 Karma: 3917598 Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Itasca, Illinois Device: Kindle Touch 7, Sony PRS300, Fire HD8 Tablet	how would you punctuate this sentence? Her vulnerability her inability to tolerate ridicule had led her to kill another human being. #1) Her vulnerability, her inability to tolerate ridicule, had led her to kill another human being. #2) Her vulnerability, her inability to tolerate ridicule had led her to kill another human being. #3) another way