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I'm not convinced by that short one either. I think it's on the right track (in terms of what a blurb is supposed to do), but I think it would need more work to get right.
Given all that has been said so far, I get the sense that #1 is a good fit to the story, and it's the one you obviously feel best about. It's not too long. And those are all good things. I'm still not real happy with that third sentence of the second paragraph, but as the choices stand now I'd vote #1.
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